[STORY] Premonition

[TiniWini]

Disclaimers:
1. This story is still on the works, please be patient with regards to updates..
2. This story is not for the faint-hearted or easily offended by sexual / violent scenes..

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Prologue

I was walking down the road on my way home.. The stars so bright, the moon staring right back at me.. I wished I was dancing with the stars, when suddenly my eyes felt heavy..

I awoke in a cold, damp, and dark place.. Everything was gone.. My phone, my wallet, my bag, and my clothes.. I was chained and gagged.. I was in trouble.. BIG trouble.. What really happened to me? Where was I? I had absolutely no idea whatsoever what was going to happen to me.. I fell asleep once more, hoping that this was just a nightmare..

Lights..

I awoke once again with lights staring back at me.. I look around and saw a table with various surgical instruments ready to use.. I was looking around some more when suddenly I heard the man speak..

"Wonderful, miss Leigh, you're awake.."

A man's silhouette looms in the distance.. I was thinking that maybe I was kidnapped.. Then it struck me..

Cold, freezing metal.. That was what I could feel on my back.. I could see more clearly now.. My arms were chained on both sides.. My legs tied up.. I could feel the metal bars on my back.. I was.. In a cage.. A cage.. Where animals are kept.. Imprisoned and locked up in..

I screamed as hard as I could to no avail, as a sock gagged me.. I was flailing my arms and legs about, or at least, trying to.. I was as helpless as a rat in fly paper..

Footsteps..

I heard him coming through the dark.. He opened the cage and got in.. He stripped his clothes and went down on me.. He kissed me on the lips then slapped me.. He licked my breasts, and put his fingers in my vag!na.. It was torture.. I tried to resist but I just can't..

He mentioned my name.. Over and over he went..

"Leigh.. Leigh.. Leigh.. Leigh.."

Then.. It got brighter..

[Blessed Devil]

Licking breasts and putting fingers in vagina is torture? What kind of woman is that? XD

[J e e c o .]

Wow. It's a really good start. X3 But hell rated. Haha. It would be really great if you continue.

Truthfully, it reminds me of B. T^T Scawy, scawy B.

BD: You don't understand, Jibbie. To people who want it, it's pure bliss, but to those who wish to protest, it's hell. Not everybody craves for sexual contact, you know. Especially with people who are strangers to you...and worse, ugly.

[TiniWini]

I saw Andy, my boyfriend, glaring down at me.

“Leigh! Are you okay? You were screaming your lungs out.”

“What?”

It was a nightmare, after all, a dark, creepy, and mysterious one. One of the worst nightmares I’ve ever had.

“You were screaming ‘no! stop!’ over and over again”

Still fazed by what happened, I stared into his eyes. I felt different – WE felt different.

“Ohh no, let’s be careful about this one, love. This might be yet another one of your premonitions.”

Yes, another premonition. A vision of the future and the events to come. I’ve always wondered why I was born this way. Sure, it’s a gift in some cases, but in cases like this, it’s a curse. This so-called “gift” has been in the Del Samonte clan for generations upon generations, and of all descendants in this generation, I’ve inherited it. Yes it’s true. I’m clairvoyant. And whenever I get nightmares, sometimes it’s nothing, but 95% of the time, it’s a warning of things to come.

Tonight wasn’t just a wala lang nightmare. It felt too true to be just a nightmare.


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I shall update again TOMORROW if anyone replies again.. XD

Thanks, Jeanelle!! <3333 LOL.. I guess that could explain to what BD commented.. X3

[J e e c o .]

^ Will that count me? x3

Wow. I envy her- I wish I get premonitions. T^T That'd be so cool.

Oh, and I was surprised by the Nightmare bit, really. I wonder what her vision would lead to...>3

[TiniWini]

It’s 3:15 in the morning, I was only supposed to stay till midnight at his place but all these requirements we have to finish just piled up. I got tired, he got tired, we both fell asleep while doing our papers.

“Andy, my dear,” I asked, “do you believe in the Devil’s Hour?”
“Well, considering you always have your visions at 3am, sure, yea I believe it. Why?”
“Nothing. Just wanted to find out.”

As he hands me a cup of coffee, I heard something break upstairs.

“Uhh, your parents are out of town, aren’t they?” I asked.
“Yes, till the rest of the week, remember? Why?”

I heard something break again, and this time, it was loud enough for Andy to hear.

“I’m scared, love. Grab the nearest broom, stick, or whatever you could hurl at whoever’s up there!”
“Way ahead of you!” he yelled as he grabbed a huge frying pan from the kitchen.

We heard something break again. This time there were footsteps. We heard the footsteps thud on the wooden second floor stair landing as we hid in the shadows.




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Yes, that includes you, my dear..

[J e e c o .]

^ OMGoshies! The Devil's hour! >.< I so believe that...

...or maybe it's just coincidence that they'd find something, right? And the premonitions...?

*pokies* Continue. >3

[TiniWini]

“I’m sure I heard someone down here. Yoo-hoo, come out come out wherever you are. We’re not going to hurt you. We’re just going to take some of your stuff and leave.”

He was huge. A six-footer, maybe. He had a gun, with his finger on the trigger. I was scared. EXTREMELY scared.

“I tried asking in a nice way, now I’ll ask again, COME OUT NOW!” he yelled as he fired a shot.

At that very moment, I screamed. And alas, he found me. His eyes all red, staring at mine like he was going to mercilessly murder me right there and then.

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NOW it gets exciting.. X3

[J e e c o .]

=O LOL, it sure is.

[TiniWini]

Okay, since I'll be a bit busy, I'll post TWO chapters!! XD

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And suddenly, as if something was controlling me, I ran. All I could remember was running out the back door without looking back, Andy a few feet behind me, and the robbers, shooting at us till we rounded a corner a block away from his house.

“Who was that?” I asked.
“Beats me, the second guy looked familiar, though. Looks like the guy my dad fired a few weeks ago. Weird guy, he is.”
“Do you think they know my house? Let’s retreat there for the meantime, then we’ll call the cops.”

We took a jeep ride to my place, just a few kilometers away. We got into my house, locked the doors, then we went to my room.

“You’re back late” said my mom, as she was clearly waiting for me in the living room.
“Yep. Sorry mom, dami kasing requirements eh.”
“Ahh ok.”

She didn’t ask why we were both so tired and perspiring. She didn’t even mind that Andy’s in my room.


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“So what do we do now? Do we tell your mom that my house is currently being robbed?”
“I don’t really know what to do, actually.”

Then my room’s door creaked.

“You don’t have to hide it. I’ll call the cops.”

The cops got there just in time. We followed the police cruisers to Andy’s house and saw the police arrest the 3 robbers who were in the middle of ransacking his house.

“I’m glad that’s over”, Andy said.
“Good thing I eavesdropped over you for once”, my mom said.
“Sweetie, mom, I feel something. This isn’t over”, I commented.
“OHH HELL NO!” they both yelled at me.

I’m serious. I don’t really know what’s going to happen but I know it isn’t over yet. Then alas, we saw smoke coming out from a window of the house.

[J e e c o .]

Mommy to teh rescue! xDD The trouble's not over- it can't be. Haha. Good job so far. ^vv^

[TiniWini]

Ohh no.. There's a lil twist to the story.. Mar-reveal ung past ng dalawang lovers.. X3

[TiniWini]

“You took away everything from me! Now I take away EVERYTHING from you!”, it’s yet another thug, coming from the back of the house, a torch in one hand, and a gun on the other.

He torched the side of the house, using the plants and bushes as fuel, as he shot at everyone in his sight.

Bullets flew. Lots of it. Some police officers were hit. Many bystanders in the nearby sari-sari store got hit as well. More bullets flew. Then he got hit, finally. I wasn’t hit, thank God. So was my mom and Andy.

The cops closed in, guns locked and loaded, towards the arsonist’s body, lying on the grass after a headshot finished his pitiful life.

The firemen arrived as well. But as they went closer with their hoses, Andy’s house, his whole house, exploded into burning rubble, throwing many policemen and firemen back. The blast was deafening, seemingly breaking all glass within a 50 meter radius. Reminds me of Glorietta.

In a parked car a several meters from the vicinity, there was a man on the phone.

“Boss, package delivered.”
“Excellent. Kill the boy.”
“Yes sir. Will do.”

[UB the fat dude]

WOW, Magnificent, WOnderful!!!

ang ganda grabe, sana tapusin mo na ito pls.

[TiniWini]

Oh ho.. This story is far from finished.. =P

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We got into the car and as we sped home, I noticed a car following us everywhere we went. I got scared. We ALL got scared.

“Mom, take a detour, there’s this car following us since we left the crime scene.”
“What? The cops didn’t say anything, so that’s not an escort. Hold on.”

We drove and drove until some time when the car following us seemed to give up.

“Let’s go home na, looks like it’s safe.”





We got home to my place safe and sound, telling the village guards that there’s a suspicious vehicle that has been following us and told them the description of the car. I was about to serve Andy an early breakfast when the phone rang. It’s Andy’s dad.

“Leigh, anak nandyan ba si Andy?” he sounded worried and anxious.
“Opo, tito. He’s here. Would you like to speak with him?”
“Yes, please.”

I gave Andy the phone and they talked for just a while.

“Uh huh. Yes dad. Okay lang po. I understand.”

When he put down the phone, he looked sad but happy.

“Oh, bakit nanaman?” I asked.
“Good news and bad news. Bad news is that my parents won’t be back till next week. Good news is that I’m staying over, HERE, till then.”
“Naku, as if you have a choice!” I replied.
“Masaya ka naman.” He said with a smirk on his face.
“Kung alam mo lang.” I shushed him as I cooked our breakfast.

He was smiling the whole time. Hey, couldn’t blame him, I was too!

[J e e c o .]

Ahem ahem. May balak? LOL. xDD Tagal mag-update aah...oh well. Busy talaga. x]

[UB the fat dude]

GO purplicius. Write a novel.....

[TiniWini]

Then two days passed, until one night, I awoke to the sound of a tricycle stopping in front of my house.

“D’you hear that?” I asked Andy, who was somehow sleeping with me.
“Hear wha~”

*CRASH!!*

“Whoa, hold on, I’ll check it out. Go hide.”

I had no choice but to hide under my bed as I watched Andy through the shadows as I overheard a conversation.

“Ikaw ba si Andres Aquino?”
“Oo, bakit? Anung kelangan nyo sa kin?”

Not another word has been spoken, I saw the horrendous sight of their shadows clashing with each other for three full minutes until some time wherein Andy’s shadow just dropped. As much as I wanted to scream, I couldn’t. As much as I wanted to move, I just couldn’t.

“Ayos. Ilagay mo na sya sa van. Tara na’t sunugin rin natin ‘tong bahay.”

I was scared, shocked, even. I just couldn’t imagine being homeless. Not now, not while I have nothing else. I then remembered Andy telling me that he always kept his 9mm under my pillow just in case.

I slid out from underneath my bed silently and grabbed the gun. I made sure it was locked and loaded, then I went out into the sala.

There he was, my boyfriend’s kidnapper, a huge man, in a bonnet and ninja-like attire. It’s time.

“Mamatay ka na.” I whispered.

When I pointed the gun at him, he saw me and pointed his at me.

Seconds felt like hours. Beads of sweat were running down my cheek as I carefully aimed the firearm at his head, right smack in the middle. It seemed like an eternity of silence then poof…

BANG!


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SUSPENSE!! XDDDD

[J e e c o .]

ZOMG! THE PLOT DEEPENS! Dx

[TiniWini]

I don’t really know what happened. We both shot at the same time. His shot hit the wall inches from me. And mine? Right smack in the middle of his head, causing him to fall to the ground in a pool of blood.

I grabbed his gun and ran out, but it was too late, the other assailants heard the shots and sped off, my Andy in tow.

I was about to step back to my room, when suddenly, everything went black.



“Baby, are you okay?” I heard.
“Leigh, my love, can you hear me? Wake up!”



I opened my eyes and I found myself inside a cage, naked, bound and tied to the bars, the cold steel pressing upon my bare skin with freezing low temperatures.

I tried to scream, but I couldn’t, as I was gagged. My arms and legs chained to the bars as if I was a vicious animal ever wanting to get free, hell, that’s how I’m feeling at the moment.

I was surveying the dark room I’m in when I heard a voice, an extremely familiar voice, talk to me and scaring the hell outta me.

“Wonderful, miss Leigh, you’re awake.”

I now recall the premonition I had exactly a week ago. Flashing in my head again. Over and over and over again.

Sure enough, he got in the cage, stripped in front of me, and raped me right then and there.

An hour passed, I passed out a couple of times already, as he thrusted in and out, and in and out, over and over again. It was terrifying. Torture, even. I never wanted this, nor did I ever deserve to be treated like this. I needed freedom. And then, something happened.

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EVEN MORE SUSPENSE!! XD